21 May 2013

CRAZY RHYME FOR YOU

IF you wish to come by night
I will fix the moon by my window;
The moonlit night ought to be bright
And stars hung so low
That they would auto-slide
Across your bed, from pillow to pillow.

If you wish to come by day
I will paint two rainbows overhead
That in me, you’d long to stay
Until the intervention by Death—
Aye, it’s a wayless way!
Let’s trail on together, unafraid.

Huh! Too much of hyperboles?! Not really.
I tell you what, check this out!

If you wish to come by night
I will paint two rainbows overhead
That in me, you’d long to stay
Until the intervention by Death—
Aye, it’s a wayless way!
Let’s trail on together, unafraid.

If you wish to come by day
I will fix the moon by my window;
And stars hung so low
That they would auto-slide
Across your bed, from pillow to pillow.

Now, let’s shuffle them like this:

If you wish to come by night
I will paint two rainbows overhead
The moonlit night ought to be bright
That in me, you’d long to stay
And stars hung so low
Until the intervention by Death—
That they would auto-slide
Aye, it’s a wayless way
Across your bed, from pillow to pillow—
Let’s trail on together, unafraid.

Or like this:

If you wish to come by day
I will fix the moon by my window
That in me, you’d long to stay;
Until the intervention by Death—
And stars hung so low
Aye, it’s a wayless way
That they would auto-slide;
Let’s trail on together, unafraid
Across your bed, from pillow to pillow.

2 comments:

  1. wow...nice. love the way you write poem. Can't wait to read more bro..:D

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    1. Sorry chum that I couldn't reply soon enough...that's cause I hardly drop by here myself....hehe....but today on, I will try to remain more active here... and yes, thanks for your lovely comment. :)

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